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This is for +cweeks. I tried to do a spontaneous portrait in b&w of someone I care about. Though, I did it in digital and not a leica. ;-)

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:iconrjcarroll:
Great shot! Lovely model! ;)

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My heart is black and my lips are cold, Cities On Flame With Rock and Roll
Three thousand guitars, they seem to cry, my ears will melt and then my eyes...
:icontriviabitter:
pretty, shiny, oh good one *!!

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I beat your dog 'cause he hit on my cat "" [link]
:iconzillahderigeaud:
beautiful shot!

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Each man kills the thing he loves...
:iconsinginius:
She should sit on that side of the camera more often... stunning.
:iconcweeks:
honestly, moments are moments are moments...

cameras are light-tight boxes that expose film thru glass...

digital ...

or leica ...

i still love this!

and the title is perfect, mate!

thanks for the thought!

cheers from los angeles!
:iconjennysaves:
The *only* real critiical thing I would work on next time...in black and white I find the lipstick can be a great effect if trying for that....dark black lips...here I think her lipstick slightly takes away from the beauty and softness that comes through...try her in B&W without lipstick next time....her eye make-up works because it is smoldering...I would 86 the lipstick...but you did say it was spontaneous...so...it can't be a real critical idea because you weren't thinking of everything small like contrast details on her face. I like the framing and the crop and the stillness...like she held her breath...

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jennysaves

When someone puts their best foot forward, do not stomp on it.
:iconmarecki:
I am not sure about DOF but definitelly it`s great natural portrait.

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The best shisha in Poland
:iconsemi234:
& she "claims" to NOT be photogenic.

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Always open to working w/ adventurous subjects (particularly if you're in Northern NY) who are brave enough to be in front of my camera. Interested? :devart: note me at your leisure & maybe we can figure something out.

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August 3, 2005
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Canon
Canon EOS 20D
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F/4.5
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Jul 24, 2005, 7:25:56 PM

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