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Artist's Comments
This is for +cweeks. I tried to do a spontaneous portrait in b&w of someone I care about. Though, I did it in digital and not a leica.
Subject: Comments
The *only* real critiical thing I would work on next time...in black and white I find the lipstick can be a great effect if trying for that....dark black lips...here I think her lipstick slightly takes away from the beauty and softness that comes through...try her in B&W without lipstick next time....her eye make-up works because it is smoldering...I would 86 the lipstick...but you did say it was spontaneous...so...it can't be a real critical idea because you weren't thinking of everything small like contrast details on her face. I like the framing and the crop and the stillness...like she held her breath...
-- jennysaves When someone puts their best foot forward, do not stomp on it. |
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August 3, 2005
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Canon
Canon EOS 20D 1/250 second F/4.5 70 mm 200 Jul 24, 2005, 7:25:56 PM |
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